We have been learning to write character descriptions. We watched a short animation here:
http://www.literacyshed.com/a-shed-full-of-animations.html
then in groups came up with descriptive language. From the language created we wrote short character descriptions. Please watch out for more character descriptions on classmates to follow next week!
WALT: Write a character description
Frank the train
robber is a mischievous man. He
works with his brother Jesse robbing trains. He always wears indigo clothes
that match his baby, ocean eyes, which sparkle like the moon in the winter! He
has very weirdly placed elephant ears and an elongated, precarious, square nose.
He has cut to the bone amber, gleaming hair. If you add that all up he has a protract,
rectangular, Dad face! Frank and his brother Jesse are greedy, selfish,
unprepossessing train robbers. If you see them,
please do NOT approach them as they are very dangerous. If you know anything
about them call this number 3.1415927.
By Jacob
Franks choice of life style is a bit peculiar some might say- he robs
trains alongside his
brother Jesse! He has the most daring and handsome face which can put you under a spell in
seconds, and the most trancing eyes you have ever seen. Frank’s prickly, chunky, chestnut
eyebrows are like bark on a tree. He likes to wear a slick suit, tight to the bone as if
there's a magnetic force holding it on! He has a cigar tightened between his lips and
his deep, beeline, sharp nose is a knife. Frank’s square, broad, blunt chin could squash
anything in its sight in an instant! To top that, he has disheveled, blotchy, stubby stubble.
He is the most mischievous, devious, daredevil train robber like a fox in the woods. If I
was you I would steer clear of Frank and his equally dubious brother.
brother Jesse! He has the most daring and handsome face which can put you under a spell in
seconds, and the most trancing eyes you have ever seen. Frank’s prickly, chunky, chestnut
eyebrows are like bark on a tree. He likes to wear a slick suit, tight to the bone as if
there's a magnetic force holding it on! He has a cigar tightened between his lips and
his deep, beeline, sharp nose is a knife. Frank’s square, broad, blunt chin could squash
anything in its sight in an instant! To top that, he has disheveled, blotchy, stubby stubble.
He is the most mischievous, devious, daredevil train robber like a fox in the woods. If I
was you I would steer clear of Frank and his equally dubious brother.
By Saskia
Train Robbin Frank!
Hey ya’ll this a lil’ description on a wanted man named Frank. He is wanted for
robbing trains with his brother Jesse, but lets just stay on Frank for now eh? Ok
lets start of with his head, Frank has a distant, gaunt, box-like head.
He has shimmering, blazing ultramarine eyes that are nearly covered by his
bushy, overgrown, forest-like eyebrows. Frank has a never ending, rectangular
nose. The train robber also owns a prickly, peculiar, wire like stubble. And yea,
that’s about it for Frank the train robber, if sight him, report immediately to your
local station.
By Luke
By Katie
Train Robbin Frank!
Hey ya’ll this a lil’ description on a wanted man named Frank. He is wanted for
robbing trains with his brother Jesse, but lets just stay on Frank for now eh? Ok
lets start of with his head, Frank has a distant, gaunt, box-like head.
He has shimmering, blazing ultramarine eyes that are nearly covered by his
bushy, overgrown, forest-like eyebrows. Frank has a never ending, rectangular
nose. The train robber also owns a prickly, peculiar, wire like stubble. And yea,
that’s about it for Frank the train robber, if sight him, report immediately to your
local station.
By Luke
Frank the Train Robber
Meet Frank, and his brother Rob. Both of
them are train robbers. Frank has lanky, slender, stick legs that help him run
from train to train! He also has faint, shaved, stubble and pentagon, wide,
gaunt ears to help him listen for trains he has shiny blue eye’s so shiny it’s
hard to describe maybe I should say blazing blue eye’s…
By Katie
Frank
the Train Robber
Once there
lived a guy named Frank, his favorite hobby in the world was to steal things
with is annoying brother Jesse.
Frank had
blazing, rectangular, ultramarine eyes and a nose as pointy as an elephants
trunk.
His face had
a shaved, faint, odd stubble appearance
and his ears looked like a pentagon.
His legs were
lanky, slender, little stick legs and he had gigantic hands.
Frank was a
very greedy little man, so he decided to hop on a train to steal a gem, and the
only thing stopping him was his sneaky little bro Jesse.
by Hayley
by Hayley
