WALT: write an invitational letter
Success Criteria:
1. includes who, what, when, where and why
2. Relates to the event and is engaging
3. Includes the correct format
Your letter should look like this...
Bernard Adams
100 Lonsdale Street,
New Brighton
Christchurch
23/11/17
Mum
56 Parsons Road
Wigram
Christchurch
Dear Mum,
Next Wednesday, November 29th, our school is performing the play 'Freddy's First Day'. There will be two screenings of the show, one at 1.15pm (which will be watched by the junior school as well) and another at 5pm, for parents and family.
The play is about a boy called Freddy who is starting New Brighton Catholic School for the first time. Freddy gets to learn lots of important things on his first day. The show is funny and includes everyone in Years 4-8. My role in the play is to control the sound for the day. Even though I do not have a speaking part, my role is very important and without it the show can not be performed.
I would really like you to come because I have spent a lot of time and effort getting ready for this. I think you will really enjoy it and we can talk about it afterwards.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, I hope you seriously consider what I have written and I hope to see you there on the day.
Yours faithfully,
Bernard
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Thursday, 23 November 2017
Monday, 13 November 2017
13/11/17
Monday Math Challenge
Entry Point One
I’m thinking of a number. Let’s call it n.
- 2n + 2 = 40
- n - 9 = 10
What does n equal?
Entry Point Two
Mr. Adams wants to show Room 1 how good vegetarian pizza can be. He orders enough pizzas for everyone in Room 1 to have two slices.
- There are 21 students in Room 1, but two are absent.
- Mr. Adams eats three slices, but Miss Park is only hungry enough for one.
- Each pizza is cut into 8 slices.
How many pizzas does Mr. Adams need to order? Are there any slices left over? If so, how many?
Entry Point Three
Luke saves and Acea spends.
Acea finds a $20 note on Sunday evening and spends $2 a day starting on Monday.
Coincidentally, Luke starts work on Monday and gets $2.50 a day.
How long will it be before Acea has more money than Luke?
Acea finds a $20 note on Sunday evening and spends $2 a day starting on Monday.
Coincidentally, Luke starts work on Monday and gets $2.50 a day.
How long will it be before Acea has more money than Luke?
Entry Point Four
I’m thinking of another number. We’ll call this one x.
- 3x - 1 = 2x + 6
What does x equal?
Entry Point Five
Laura can paint a room by herself in 3 hours. Saskia can do it in 4 hours.
Ellie would take 6 hours on her own. If they all work together and don’t get in each other’s way, how long will the job take?
Ellie would take 6 hours on her own. If they all work together and don’t get in each other’s way, how long will the job take?
Wednesday, 8 November 2017
Monday, 6 November 2017
Wednesday, 1 November 2017
Writing Prompt
Today we are going to do a writing sample.
The results of this sample will be used for your reports!
This is what you need for your writing prompt
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1KGva7BbL2kYMFy93H-yFrTeb3BRa7u6p2YScYapYi78/edit?ts=59f7f29a#slide=id.g273d4b898f_0_0
Make sure you use extended punctuation
Include words that you think describe the places well
Use metaphors, similes, alliterations, onomatopoeias etc.
Ensure your narrative has the following:
1. introduction
2. problem
3. solution
4. character descriptions
I wish you all the best!
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